She quickly glanced the other way.
‘No, this girl looks too close to be any other person. She is infact Madhu!! “Hey, Madhu!” he called.
She struggled hard not to respond to that call. And successfully managed it too.
“Hey Madhu, you forgot me?” he inquired her and came closer.
The old lady sitting opposite to him was looking at this unapprovingly.
“No, you are mistaken, My name is not Madhu.. I am Supriya” she lied.
“Hey Ram!, a young girl cannot travel safely in this country without being stalked!” the old lady muttered angrily.
His heart told him it was Madhu, followed her, all thoughts about going to the city vanished; he was on delighted to have met Madhu after such a long time. He was filled with memories of their time together. He finally caught up with her. Looking into her eyes he said ‘ Why Madhu? Why this to me?’
“Please dont lie to me anymore”; sounding more like the Mani he used to be ten years back when he had first met her at the Village temple, rather than the arrogant side that seemed to rule his life now. “I know it is you, nobody else but you Madhu”. Tears roll down her cheecks as she tries to remember why they ended up this way. Was it destiny or fate that they had to meet now?
As she speaks up, the train which for a while had be at a halt, slowly starts to move.
Now,he was not in a state to loose her again .Though they didn’t speak any word ,everything was clear .
Now also ,they were able to read what was running in each others mind.
He slowly held her palms into his. She couldn’t stop him though she wanted too.
For a moment ,they forgot everything.All that was felt,they want to live a new life together.
He later discovered that both were going to the same construction site for the job..
Same job at the same construction site?!! Same destination?!! He was too shocked to react.
“How could this be possible?” he wondered. His mind went reeling to the past. The hidden past. The past of which he wanted no more.
“Remember? Remember Mani??? 5 years ago…” his mind talking. He does not like to be called Mani but his mind was not listening. His mind, which always was within his control, was rolling back to the past.
“5 years ago in the train. Both you & Madhu to the same destination unknown to eachother just like today. That’s when it happened…”
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I would like to tag:
PV
Praveen (Sorry Dude. Without permission hope you will be a sport!)
Prasad (Sorry Dude. Without permission hope you will be a sport!)
good rp..u done it with gr8 spirit..thank you..u lead my branch..:-)
story in a good move..
hmm… no probs yaar.. am gonna take ur tag for sure in a weeks time as stated here 🙂
a very interesting tag this is.. 🙂
@div: Thanks. I have two confirmed gr8z here: PV & Prasad. This sure is a competition. But, I would not underestimate Praveen either. His comments are sometimes very good & interesting. Letz c who gets better of whom…. Personally, I would prefer, in the most selfish manner, to have all the three of them getting better of each of them.
@prasad: Dude!!!! U made my day. U r truely a gr8 sport. B sure I will provide ye with a free pick up & drop. 😉 Thanks for accepting my tag. But be sure you will get more… 😀
hmmmmmmmmmm
@deepa: Was that a +ve response or a -ve response? may be I shud tag you next time… 😉
I dont know …. i am kinda fed up w/ all the boy-meets-girl, boy-loves-girl,boy-loses-girl things …..
totally fed up !!!!!!!
@Rp .. will do it during this weekend and will be up by sunday Night
@deepa: wohkay! U r not alone deeps, there are quite a few who belong to ur league. I respect your dislikes. But, truthfully, I would have prefered a different **earlier** posts, deviating away from these beaten theme of ‘boy-gal-sacrifice-get.back.together’. Guess, both me & my tagger 😉 was left with minimal choice. So had to continue… Will tag you for something better.
@PV, the poet: No issues man. But sorry for having taken Prasad, the maams away from your list. 🙂
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UPDATE !!!
hey RP, the tag is done.. u can check my blog 🙂
jus in time to complete the tag i guess.. 🙂
u r in TEL ??
@virdi: Thanks man. Will definitely use it asap. And, welcome to my blog. 🙂
@deepa: releasing soon….
@prasad: gr8 dude. Went thru it. Its wonderful. Keep it going.
@deepa: Yep. And how did ye know? R u also from TEL?
gr8 to meet you man by the where r u now?
@nagu: r u also in TEL?
Me very very sorry , I couldnt do the story continuation …… thats bad on part .. 🙁 🙁